I'm going to try and be as unbiased as i can considering this isn't the kinda music i usualy listen too, but the beat sounds good. Very emotional and easy to listen to. I like the concept you have when it's coming to the vocals i just think you should add some echo in the back to help carry on the song and connect the lyrics a little bit. Besides that nice job man!
Yeah, I am going to put in more vocals so it sounds better.
EDIT: I tried to put more vocals in and didn't like it, so instead of putting echoes in the other parts of the song, I put echo on my new vocals. :P
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